Nenita Gockel
Friday, August 12, 2011
Elimination question round 1. Eliminate 10 from these?
Lol, nice to see you took my advice and shortened the list. I eliminate all except for "Dawn of the Dead" and "The Silence of the Lambs".
When will these horror remakes be out in theatres?
i know halloween 3 comes out in 2012, fright night comes out in august, but what about poltergeist, nightmare on elm street 2, friday the 13th 2, and pet sematary
Proofread my love story?
Take out the line "It was time to have a first crush" That doesn't make sense, take that line out. Take out the part "I can't believe my own brother would cause me to feel distress, Alex said" Alex wouldn't have felt distress, it was a normal question for Darwin to ask, there is not reason for Alex to feel distress here. Take that part out and leave the rest of what you said there. I love how you write Michelle as a strong woman, great job. She has her deal breakers in her relationship,, she sticks to them, Darwin changes for her deal breakers and she gives him another chance. Good writing there, very believable. Wait, what happened to first love, true love? Why didn't Alex move with Jane to the New Province? You have to work on your build up. I don't like the way you have a guy meet a girl one day, then profess his love for her and that is it. I think a guy meets a girl he likes, maybe he has to build up confidence to ask her out on a date, and it should take several dates before he professes his love to her. The characters need time to get to know each other, even if they know each other from the same town, the same school, dating is different, you need time to build up trust. Build up your story, drag it out. If a guy just comes up to me and says "I love you" it does not make sense that I am just going to drop everything I am doing and magically fall in love with him back and then the next day be married. A guy might ask me out, I might say yes, I would probably say no, but maybe the guy doesn't quit. Maybe he ask the girl out again and then she says yes, and they date several times and then when they get to know each other better, then he can say "I love you" I love you are words that are supposed to have meaning in a relationship, they are supposed to be special, and guys shouldn't just say them on a first date, a guy should say "I love you" at a special moment. If a guy just walked up to me and said "I love you" I would probably think he was crazy. Build up to the I love you moment, drag the romance out, build up to the moment, it should be special. A guy says I love you over a romantic dinner, he doesn't say I love you over a bag of groceries, but I like how you put buying groceries into the story. I Love the part where Alex learns from his failed relationships and doesn't quit Rosa. That part makes wonderful sense. Girls like it when a guy doesn't quit them. You have set ups in this story for future stories, so it is nice that the story doesn't have to end here.
Help. I want a relationship.?
This is difficult to admit. Usually on when posting this on a different website. I will expound on my past life, and explain how depression and social insecurity have plagued my existence from an ealy age. A lack of social contact leads to a lack of social contact. A pattern emerged where in my younger and more formative years I was focused more on not committing suicide that I was figuring out how to date or having sex. Essentially, thats what happened. When I left for university I burnt all of my bridges at home in the hopes for a better future in another state. I spent the first semester getting drunk with my fraternity. I had to leave the next semester due to dropping out of the fraternity; the story is complex. The old pattern of depression and isolation of high school repeated itself. To say that I hated the dorms would be an understatement. I succeed in moving out last year. Its a year that has been good to me; to say nothing of my anti-depressant prescription and yet. I am still a 23 year old who had never had a girlfriend and totally and utterly inexperienced at the arts of courtship or intimacy. I feel like I have to pack what should have been 10 years of learning into 1 year. Keeping in mind that in the dating marketplace I am horribly undervalued due to my inexperience. In essence: I realize that my life has been rather unusual for a scion of upper middle class parents who is attractive, well off, and (frankly, thank you books!) highly intelligent. I've coped by burying my past; all of it. While continuously not satisfied by my present conditions. Perhaps I have unrealistic expectations? Perhaps I don't have any idea what happiness, or normalcy, or satisfaction mean? But I want this, this simple one thing. I want a relationship. I deserve one. I want to kiss, fondle, love, stare into the eyes of another human being...the things that I deserve just as I deserve my scared dignity! But how?
Seattle - 3 or 4 days?
You should eb able to do it if you move quick. But don't rush yourself because a lot of the things are really interesting. When you go to Pike Place, make sure to try their salmon, it's the BEST.
Is it just me or are all step mothers unpleasant? and what should i do with mine?
Okay so here's my dilemma, i have a wonderful dad who married a completely unpleasant women. Basically it all started when i was in 7th grade and my step mom went snooping through my room and read my diary. Now as what a 12 or 13 year old girl who is upset with her step mom for complaining about turning a light switch on too loud and writes in her diary, " i sometimes wish she would go far far away." that doesnt really seem like an intelligent adult would start a war over that, but mine did. she swore i was out to get her. Now granted i felt bad that i hurt her feelings so i did try over the years to be nice and help out around the house, but it was never good enough. My step mom is a cold unhappy person. and its not just me she hates. she picks fights with my aunts, hates all my uncles, and complains about every one. My family has tried everything to counseling to vacation bonding. I have done everything i possibly can too, despite the fact she came at with a knife, spit on me, told me i should kill myself, and slammed me against a mirror when i was thirteen. My uncles and brother think im crazy for even pitying her still and trying to be nice. I need some outside the box opinions and advice, what do i do to make this woman like me? I tolerate her for one reason and one reason alone, my dad and baby sister. My dad is getting older and i dont want him to be alone all his life, and my baby sister who is technically my half sister from my dad and step mom, i love her with all my heart. and as having to be a child that was stuck in the middle of a nasty divorce, i would never want that for her. divorces hurt. Im almost 20 now and i still wish i had had a mother who knew how to love her family. so folks, what do i need to do? failure and giving up really isnt an option. i need to do something to make this unpleasant women back off a bit.
I'm a preteen and am I gay?
Ok well I'm really confused. So this is my dilemma, I'm 13 and I don't know if I'm gay or straight. Sometimes I dream about men but when I look at men I don't get hard but when i look at women I don't get hard. When I grow up, and try sex with women, then will I know for sure if I'm straight ( after puberty)
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